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Proofreading the Bali Hai web site

Written by: Tony Korologos | Date: Thursday, September 10th, 2009
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I’m doing some freelance writing about Vegas golf courses. In doing my research I’ve found a few typos on the Bali Hai web site. You think with the budget Bali Hai must have, they’d have someone spell check and proof their text before they publish it:

bit hitters can play over the bunker on the right side…

I may not be a “big” hitter but I’m certainly a “bit” hitter.

The second shot should be played beyond the cart path and oft of the bunker just short of the green.

I usually play my shots “oft” the bunkers too. I find it werkz bitter thet waye.

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